I see elements of Unkinojoe's style here which is cool. However, your voice acting doesn't sound great; it sounds as if you're keeping your voice down, although, I can understand why, since talking into a microphone is definitely a nerve racking experience at first so I'm sure that it'll improve with time as you get more comfortable with it.
The overall humour wasn't that great in my opinion and the cancer joke felt incredibly out of place aswell as being a very risky move. However, the ending with Amethyst was amusing.
I hope to see more from you in the future! :)
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